Line 1 of 5 · Hero h1
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Nine plumbing and gas services across Inner Brisbane.
Reads like shit.
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Line 2 of 5 · Properties and projects (heading)
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Properties and projects
This should target bodycorps and builders better.
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Line 3 of 5 · Properties and projects (body)
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Send the site, the timing and how the property is used.
Same note — speak to body corporates and builders, not a generic form prompt.
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Line 4 of 5 · Prepare early
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Prepare early
Should be preventative maintenance.
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Line 5 of 5 · Inner Brisbane first
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Inner Brisbane first
This reads quite poorly.
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