Line 1 of 5 · Hero h1
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Plumbing for Inner Brisbane, and out to Redcliffe, Ipswich and Beenleigh when the job justifies the travel.
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Line 2 of 5 · Hero subtext
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Inner Brisbane is the primary service area. Beyond it, what decides the trip is the job itself, the travel and availability.
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Line 3 of 5 · Map h2 (practical edges)
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Redcliffe, Ipswich and Beenleigh mark the practical edges.
Reads like shit.
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Line 4 of 5 · Job-versus-postcode h3
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The job matters as much as the postcode.
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Line 5 of 5 · Final CTA h2
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Have a suburb and job in mind?
Bare quoted line, still flagged.
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