Line 1 of 8 · Card 01 heading
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Water pools against the house
Quoted with the body under “Reads poorly”. The heading already names the symptom.
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Line 2 of 8 · Card 01 body
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It sits there after rain instead of running away.
Reads poorly. Pronoun + water “running away”.
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Line 3 of 8 · Card buttons
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Choose this
Change all choose this to select.
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Line 4 of 8 · Card 06 heading
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Nothing yet, and you want it kept that way
Rewrite this. Coy prevention card among five symptoms.
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Line 5 of 8 · Card 06 body
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Preventative work before the next wet stretch.
Rewrite this. Fragment, “wet stretch”.
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Line 6 of 8 · Scope h2
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Private property only. Not council drains, not civil works.
Rewrite this. Not-X, not-Y heading. Exclusions already sit under “What it does not”.
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Line 7 of 8 · What this covers lead
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Work on the property, agreed before it starts.
Rewrite this. Two fragments, no actor.
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Line 8 of 8 · Enquiry h2
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Tell us what you see, and where.
Bare quote. Clipped “, and where.”
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